[Kenichi Denshi] Shirahama Kenichi

Enjoy reading and plss add him D: !

Stats:

Max Healt
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Atk Speed
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Base damage
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Defense
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Movement speed
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Background history:
Shirahama Kenichi is good-natured, timid and cowardly, frequently treated as a friendless loser at the beginning of the series. He loves gardening and reading How to... books. However, that all changed when he met Miu Fūrinji, and shows no fear in the face of true danger. After the fateful meeting, he decided to stand for himself and be truly strong; or at least, strong enough to protect those who are dear to him.

Attack type: Melee

Stats Growth
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Atks Speed: =
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Default Skill

Spoiler:

Eyes of the spirit !! (Passive/Aura)


Kenichi cant be the martial artist with more talent of the earth , buy he have a amazing spirit for protect himself and his friends, so he will force his body to the max for be the strongest martial artis of the world.
Together this spirit and the insane training with his teacher give some amazing results.
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One time Kenichi reach the 50% of his hp , he win a maximun bost in all his stats.
+100% Max healt base stats
+100% Atk speed base stats
+100% Base damage base stats
and every teammate who is near to him win
+5% of his hp(Kenichi hp) in defense points

1st Skill

Spoiler:

Ryuusei Seikuken(Passive)


Like a rock in the river, kenichi just let the atks of the enemy pass to his side, he can avoid all the incoming atks.
Depends of the level of the Ryuusei, he can even use the enemy power agaist him and do a massive damage.
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Passive:kenichi get some ability for dodge the enemy atks, besides of this is kenichi take control of the enemy movements he can take it down with a massive power.
Passive/Active: After kenichi recive 5 atks, kenichi will reflect the incoming damage to his enemy with a bonus damage.
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Level 1 - Evasion chance 10%/After 5 atk kenichi block the enemy atk and do 150 damage+ The 20% of enemy damage(base)
Level 2 - Evasion chance 14%/After 5 atk kenichi block the enemy atk and do 350 damage+ The 30% of enemy damage(base)
Level 3 - Evasion chance 18%/After 5 atk kenichi block the enemy atk and do 550 damage+ The 40% of enemy damage(base)
Level 4 - Evasion chance 22%/After 5 atk kenichi block the enemy atk and do 750 damage+ The 50% of enemy damage(base)
Level 5 - Evasion chance 26%/After 5 atk kenichi block the enemy atk and do 950 damage+ The 60% of enemy damage(base)

2nd Skill

Spoiler:

Korui Nuki(Active) Damage type: true damage


A vertical kick aimed at the target's defense, this kick can destroy any defense .
Kenichi use the power of the floor and use his body like a transmition of this power for let it free with a vertical kick to his enemy.
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Kenichi atk the enemy with a powerful vertical kick(melee range) doing true damage and lowering the defense of the enemy by 12 and get stunned by 2 secs
Is Kenichi have "Eyes of spirit" active, he win a bonus damage.
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Level 1 - Kenichi do 350 universal damage and reduce the defence of the enemy for 5 secs.Bonus damage 200
Level 2 - Kenichi do 500 universal damage and reduce the defence of the enemy for 7 secs.Bonus damage 300
Level 3 - Kenichi do 650 universal damage and reduce the defence of the enemy for 9 secs.Bonus damage 400
Level 4 - Kenichi do 800 universal damage and reduce the defence of the enemy for 11 secs.Bonus damage 500
Level 5 - Kenichi do 950 universal damage and reduce the defence of the enemy for 13 secs.Bonus damage 600
CD: 35/33/31/29/26 secs

3rd Skill

Spoiler:

Seikuken(Active) Damage type: AoE


The first level of seikuken consist in mark a zone with the limit of the hands of the user, for atk everything who go inside that zone.
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Kenichi Mark his Seikuken area and atk every enemy who is inside it doing a aoe damage around he in a time of 4 sec.
One time seikuken is active no one can join to the area.
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Level 1 - Kenichi do 125 Dps (500 for sec) and repell any enemy who try to join to that area for the 4 sec of duration.
Level 2 - Kenichi do 187.5 Dps (750 for sec) and repell any enemy who try to join to that area for the 4 sec of duration.
Level 3 - Kenichi do 250 Dps (1000 for sec) and repell any enemy who try to join to that area for the 4 sec of duration.
Level 4 - Kenichi do 312.5 Dps (1250 for sec) and repell any enemy who try to join to that area for the 4 sec of duration.
Level 5 - Kenichi do 375 Dps (1500 for sec) and repell any enemy who try to join to that area for the 4 sec of duration.
CD: 14/16/18/20/22
(Is the enemy blink inside he will recive damage and get trapped in there)

Ultimate

Spoiler:

Mubyoshi [Single target](Active)


Minute 6:00-7:41
It is a swift and strong punch, using the principles of Karate (moving the punching hand and the non-active hand at the same time as if "connected behind the back through a pulley"), Juijutsu (as if using a sword, by throwing ones body weight into the opponent to cut through a person),Chinese Kenpo (surpassing the limit of the mind with the feeling of sending your hand flying out), and Muay Thai (hit the enemy as if you're punching through him).
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Kenichi combine all the rulez of his master martial arts, getting a close range to the enemy he is able to perform the final punch , kenichi need some secs for cast it(1 sec) , when he perform the punch he do a amazing damage to his enemy and knock him back(450 range).
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Level 1 - Kenichi Cast for 1 sec and later do 2000 damage to his enemy when his enemy is knock back he do half damage to enemys in that lane.
Level 2 - Kenichi Cast for 1 sec and later do 4000 damage to his enemy when his enemy is knock back he do half damage to enemys in that lane.
Level 3 - Kenichi Cast for 1 sec and later do 6000 damage to his enemy when his enemy is knock back he do half damage to enemys in that lane
CD: 140/115/90 secs

I hope everyone enjoy this post, i really want this character to join the figth. tell me what thing about it and what to change !! seeya goodluck !

Changelogs:

Spoiler:

1.1:
- Reduce the growth of the stats.
- Added cooldown to all skills.
- Reduce the damage of 1st skill to 150/350/550/750/950

1.2:
-Nerf normal damage of Korui nuki and added damage in eyes of the spirit

1.3:
-Added 50 more chaos damage to Korui nuki
-Reduce Cooldown of Korui nuki to 35/33/31/29/26 secs
-Mayor change in ultimate damage and execution.
-Added know back range to ultimate.
-Reduce the % of bonus damage of ryusei seikuken to 20/30/40/50/60%
-Now kenichi need to recive 5 hits before do the block + atk in ryusei seikuken
-Reduce the background history
-Now Seikuken dont repell spell

1.4:
-Now can blink inside seikuken but , you will get trapped and will recive damage from the seconds left.
-Fixed some redaction problems in the Seikuken skill
-Korui nuki now do Universal damage.
-Seikuken do Normal damage.

OMFG this is too much ==

I love this manga! The skill set is good but very imbalanced. Nerf spells?

Sure i can do it, just tell me what is too much
PD: when i come back from school i nerf the skill :) ! ty for suggest

Here are my suggestions:

-default -> 50% of his hp in defense point will be too much (Example: If he has 1000 hp, defense bonus will be 500 armor?)
-Base stats boosted too much, like omegasui said =)

-1st skill -> generates after 3 attacks...I think no one will ever dare to touch him

-2nd skill -> nice skill, balanced

-3rd skill -> can you please display cooldown?

-Ulti -> should do the damage in a cast line, crash damage not involved in the cast line
-Extra damage receives should add a little bit

DEAncientNaga wrote:Here are my suggestions:

-default -> 50% of his hp in defense point will be too much (Example: If he has 1000 hp, defense bonus will be 500 armor?)
-Base stats boosted too much, like omegasui said =)

-1st skill -> generates after 3 attacks...I think no one will ever dare to touch him

-2nd skill -> nice skill, balanced

-3rd skill -> can you please display cooldown?

-Ulti -> should do the damage in a cast line, crash damage not involved in the cast line
-Extra damage receives should add a little bit

first to all thanks for suggest, i will start answering.

-When kenichi reach his 50% of hp he boost stats . The bonus defense is only for the allies who are close to him, and is not 50% is ->5%<- . Exanple 1000hp/95=10 armor. is just the 5% of the hp

-You say his 1st skill is too imba ? that is why anyone want to touch him ? i can nerf it but pls talk clear :)

-Thanks for say the 2nd is balanced :)

-I will add cooldown to all the skills in like 10 minutes, i just come back from school.

-I think is he do the skill in a lane , he can easily push the whole team agaist a wall and do a massive kill. is a lot of damage for a lane skill and a global nuke like that is kinda imba , i will wait for more suggest for check that.

Thanks for all , pls suggest more

lol im just reading this manga currently chapter:328 its good but i dont like suggesting and tampering with people skills so i aint got anything else to say
xD

The10th-X wrote:lol im just reading this manga currently chapter:328 its good but i dont like suggesting and tampering with people skills so i aint got anything else to say
xD

I am not the best english speaker can you tell me what mean tampering ?
and pls make some suggest , that class of critic dont help

Juma wrote:-When kenichi reach his 50% of hp he boost stats . The bonus defense is only for the allies who are close to him, and is not 50% is ->5%<- . Exanple 1000hp/95=10 armor. is just the 5% of the hp

-You say his 1st skill is too imba ? that is why anyone want to touch him ? i can nerf it but pls talk clear :)

-Thanks for say the 2nd is balanced :)

-I will add cooldown to all the skills in like 10 minutes, i just come back from school.

-I think is he do the skill in a lane , he can easily push the whole team agaist a wall and do a massive kill. is a lot of damage for a lane skill and a global nuke like that is kinda imba , i will wait for more suggest for check that.

-Ohh that first one was my eyes problem, sorry eh.

Evasion chance 26%/After 3 atk kenichi block the enemy atk and do 950 damage+ The 90% of enemy damage(base)

-But I thought after getting 3 attack my enemy, kenichi blocks it and do 950+90% enemy base damage?
-Because um...after you hit him 3 times he do 950 damage to you, isn't it horrible?
-Correct me if I'm wrong

-Cooldown -> Okay, nice =)

-How about just do a line with crash damage behind the target you casted? Example: 4100+1300 dmg on target, crash damage = 1300

Thanks for receiving my suggests.

DEAncientNaga wrote:

Juma wrote:-When kenichi reach his 50% of hp he boost stats . The bonus defense is only for the allies who are close to him, and is not 50% is ->5%<- . Exanple 1000hp/95=10 armor. is just the 5% of the hp

-You say his 1st skill is too imba ? that is why anyone want to touch him ? i can nerf it but pls talk clear :)

-Thanks for say the 2nd is balanced :)

-I will add cooldown to all the skills in like 10 minutes, i just come back from school.

-I think is he do the skill in a lane , he can easily push the whole team agaist a wall and do a massive kill. is a lot of damage for a lane skill and a global nuke like that is kinda imba , i will wait for more suggest for check that.

-Ohh that first one was my eyes problem, sorry eh.

Evasion chance 26%/After 3 atk kenichi block the enemy atk and do 950 damage+ The 90% of enemy damage(base)

-But I thought after getting 3 attack my enemy, kenichi blocks it and do 950+90% enemy base damage?
-Because um...after you hit him 3 times he do 950 damage to you, isn't it horrible?
-Correct me if I'm wrong

-Cooldown -> Okay, nice =)

-How about just do a line with crash damage behind the target you casted? Example: 4100+1300 dmg on target, crash damage = 1300

Thanks for receiving my suggests.

ok well the skill of ryusei, emm is kinda imba so , i am thinking what should be better ? make the damage effect activate with 6/7/8/9 atks ? or reduce the damage of kenichi ? or both ?
tell me what you think about this.

and well the ultimate, lets see, i was thinking in do the total damage of the crash+The atk to one hero, and half of that damage to every enemy who is hit by the original one. I think i dont explain so good so lets explain with a example.

Kenichi Atks Ichigo doing 5400 damage(in level 3) and send ichigo fliying to grimmjow , in this case grimmjow will recibe 2700 wave damage, what do you think about this ? :)

Snap i totally forgot about this one == Well it's 23:32 atm, will lend a hand or two tomorrow.

Thanks omegasui for respown to me pm so fast :) !
Really man ... thanks :)

Shorter background is needed.


Default skill :

One time Kenichi reach the 50% of his hp , he win a maximun bost in all his stats.

So it's only once? Lasts forever or ? seconds ? If not once, cooldown until he reach triggering condition = ?
1st skill :

Passive/Active: After kenichi recive 3 atks, kenichi will reflect the incoming damage to his enemy with a bonus damage.

What kind of attack? the third one to attack him will be affected or the one that attacks him for 3 times? Too much dmg bonus. Damage type = ?
2nd skill : WTH is true dmg ? Pure? Chaos? Uknown ? Universal?
Armor reduction before or after the kick? CD too much?!
3rd skill :

Kenichi do 1500 damage over time (375 for sec) and repell any enemy or spells from that area for the 4 sec of duration.

ZOMG WTF? You don't know what 'damage over time' means do you. Anyway, just state "Deals XXX DPS...."
Repell = ?????? u mean repel? so how will u dmg the enemy if you repel them from that area? Repel spells = omg.
Ultimate : knockback = ? range? What about enemies on the knockback line ?

omegasui wrote:Shorter background is needed.


Default skill :

One time Kenichi reach the 50% of his hp , he win a maximun bost in all his stats.

So it's only once? Lasts forever or ? seconds ? If not once, cooldown until he reach triggering condition = ?
1st skill :

Passive/Active: After kenichi recive 3 atks, kenichi will reflect the incoming damage to his enemy with a bonus damage.

What kind of attack? the third one to attack him will be affected or the one that attacks him for 3 times? Too much dmg bonus. Damage type = ?
2nd skill : WTH is true dmg ? Pure? Chaos? Uknown ? Universal?
Armor reduction before or after the kick? CD too much?!
3rd skill :

Kenichi do 1500 damage over time (375 for sec) and repell any enemy or spells from that area for the 4 sec of duration.

ZOMG WTF? You don't know what 'damage over time' means do you. Anyway, just state "Deals XXX DPS...."
Repell = ?????? u mean repel? so how will u dmg the enemy if you repel them from that area? Repel spells = omg.
Ultimate : knockback = ? range? What about enemies on the knockback line ?

Default skill, the duration of the skill is until he die or until he recover his hp , for example is someone give you enough damage for send you to 30% of you max hp, kenichi will activate the effect until he reach 51%+ max hp or until he die.

1st skill: melee atacks. the third atk what he recive will be block and the source of that atk is the one who recive the damage. i will reduce the damage then. I dont know too much about damage types, give some info about that and i tell you.

2nd skill:with true damage i mean "direct damage, dont care the defense/magic resist/magic reduc/magic defense" so is that damage dont care how hard are you. After the kick. i will reduct the CD then ;)

3rd skill: Well lets stat, is 1500 dps, i mean do 375 each sec. it cant repell spells. when you active the skill everyone who is in the damage range is trapped in there receiving the damage, but with i repell i mean to the outsiders of the skills, is i active the skill and i get ichigo in there , he recive damage , but is grimmjow come for save it he cant join the area of damage he must atk me with skills from outside.

ultimate skill: i am going to change this one, the new one will be, kenichi atk one enemy with the mubiyoshi, that enemy will recive total damage , it will back like 400 range and is he crush with some other enemy they will recive half of the total damage.

_The statement in your tooltip is confusing.
_ Try this : http://www.wc3c.net/showthread.php?p=1030046#post1030046

In DotA the generic damage function uses ATTACK_TYPE_HERO,DAMAGE_TYPE_MAGIC for pure damage.

_ -> Pure. Does armor reduction stacks with item's ?
_ == it's 375 DPS, not 1500 dps. 1500 dps after 4 s -> 6k total dmg. -->"Keeps enemies from going in or out", btw the word is "repel", further note, can one blink in-out there?.
_ Dmg type = ?

I see you're onl atm, how about using the chat box ?

ok lets chat, well i add the damage type of seikuken, i change the damage of korui nuki to universal
and when you say stacks with items ,you mean is i reduce the armor of the enemy items ? well yes.
is you mean is i have a item what do armor reduct to enemy , well stacks anyway haha, check now pls

the champ is really good, can someone look the post and add him ?
come on tom the game just have 5-7 mans :S

lol this happens all the time just wait till he looks and gives feedback i still need him to look at 3 of my topics ;)

damm my pos is like death, someone want to check a eye in here ?

btw your base stats healt no "h"? that's my comment